While Whyborne and Griffin kept their chemistry intact even with mild annoyances such as the flirty Caldwell, Feximal and Caldwell didn't.
Or at least, I am assuming it was supposed to be humorous or something.
This is one of my most hated tropes, but fortunately it had only a teasing character here. I thought we left that crap in Threshold. There are dead bodies without eyes, tongues, genitals and such, but I spent half of the story dreading the part when an established couple would have to deal with crap like a third person. I think there should be some kind of test to determine who can write blurbs. This: 'Feximal clearly suspects the worst of Whyborne – and his flirtatious sidekick seems to think a great deal too well of Griffin.' completely ruined a perfectly good paranormal story.
Whyborne and Caldwell tell a story through alternate chapters. Hawk's part of the story, for Whyborne and Griffin. Let me be clear: the rating is for Jordan L.
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